being able to use Blender to map out a 2D illustration is so cool.
i think you could push the perspective and composition a bit more! like a lower or higher angle, for more fear and tension (the sort of pathos that eg. Junji Ito page turns have). but only if that's something you want to go for. this already works for a quieter, less panicked and more entranced/confused sort of vibe.
i like your art style so far!! i look forward to the finished version ♥